Paradise is across the dark river. Toby can’t see through the fog clinging to the slowly moving surface. But he knows she is over there, waiting for him. Stroking his wedding band with his thumb, he wades into the chilling current. Toby wonders if he can reach the afterlife before he drowns.


52 word stories over the course of 52 weeks


6 responses »

  1. […] page of their own (or rather their titles with links to the original entries).  If you like these (Mourning, Knockout, Corners, Strength, Quest), perhaps the others will find you interested as […]

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  3. Karen says:

    This one is dark and sad…Emily Dickinson perhaps. Your posts get better and better each week.

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